<div dir="ltr">Suggestions:<br><br>Replace "taking place at" with "emerging/materializing/developing at"<br><div>Is the second "Event:" necessary?<br></div><div><br>Change "For this event" to "At this event" (maybe replace "event" with "open house"? Or something else welcoming.)<br>
</div><div><br>Reword first two sentences: At this open house, see the Makerspace bathed in temperature responsive mood lighting -- an interactive lighting fixture by Alia Tsang using an Arduino to change light color based on temperature shifts and humidity. <br>
</div><div><br>Can people hit the drum? If yes: "Check out the sound on Jeff Tolentino's handcrafted Okedo-style drum constructed with piping, rope, hand-stretched rawhide, and decorated with finely painted designs." (If no, maybe something like "Examine/admire the detail on")<br>
<br>And maybe something like: "All the while/While the shared* 3-D printers materialize busts and impossible shapes out of plastic thread, artist Emily Schleiner's sculpture "Walking" will have words on the topic of time-travel climbing up, down, and around
walls using tools such as a video projector and reflective glass."<br></div><div>*or some better phrase to hint that the 3-D printers are available for people to experiment with?<br><br></div><div>Alia<br></div></div>
<div class="gmail_extra"><br><br><div class="gmail_quote">On Mon, Sep 9, 2013 at 12:16 AM, Emily Schleiner <span dir="ltr"><<a href="mailto:cordia...@gmail.com" target="_blank">cordia...@gmail.com</a>></span> wrote:<br>
<blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex"><div dir="ltr">Hey All,<div><br></div><div>We are officially listed in the Art About this Friday! We can discuss that more on Monday night. ...But I'm hoping to send out this press release to a few different blogs and papers tonight. Let me know if you think this is alright or if anything needs to be changed. (Or added -- please more projects)</div>
<div><br></div><div>Thanks, </div><div>Emily</div><div><br></div><div><br></div><div><br></div><div><div>For Immediate Release</div><div><br></div><div>Event: Strange New Attractor, an Exhibition by the DMS Community</div>
<div>Date: Friday, September 13th, 2013 at 6:00pm.</div><div>Venue: Davis Makerspace, 221 G Street, Suite 1337. Davis, California</div><div>Web: DavisMakerspace.org, <a href="mailto:con...@davismakerspace.org" target="_blank">con...@davismakerspace.org</a></div>
<div><br></div><div>Event: Davis Makerspace presents “Strange New Attractor”, an exhibition featuring art and displays from the newly forming community of builders, hackers and artists that make up Davis Makerspace! Be amazed by the crafted, bended, and programmed objects and projects on the theme of new beginnings taking place at DMS. </div>
<div><br></div><div>For this event see an interactive lighting fixture by Alia Tsang, an Arduino controlled piece that changes color based on temperature shifts and humidity. Check out this temperature responsive mood lighting! Jeff Tolentino will have a handcrafted Okedo-Style drum exhibited, an object constructed with piping, rope, hand-stretched rawhide, with finely painted designs on the exterior. Artist Emily Schleiner will exhibit a sculpture called "Walking" that causes words on the topic of time-travel to climb up, down, and around walls using tools such as: a video projector and reflective glass. Come and observe the magic 3D Printers at work. The printers will be active and printing busts and other interesting shapes. Come and enjoy the creative work of this ingenious grassroots community! </div>
<div><br></div><div>About Davis Makerspace: Davis Makerspace is a diverse group of builders, makers, hackers, and programmers who share an interest in science, technology, art, and what happens when those interests collide. They work with hardware and software, metal and wood. They build robots and trebuchets. They teach and they learn. But above all else, they make.</div>
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